A late night snack for hungry lovers
A meeting of the hearts
Just a casual conversation between sleep
Or, Another tearing at the souls of love
Words and actions that can't be forgotton
The late night beatings of the brow
Neighbors lights at 3AM
A realization in the minds of many
The glory of the good
Demise of the negative
A contest entry
- 10 lines or incredible poetry by Lavender Butterfly.
550 points, ended December 15, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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this took me in two different directions .
i like this poem
it maked me think
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Thank you for the comment and applause on this poem. Happy you enjoyed it. Don
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excellent~
And what things do happen when the lights go out
You got this one penned perfect....
Like honeybear my thoughts run crazy when I see the neighbors lights on in the wee hrs of the morning...she is an older lady.and widow I worry about her...
Great poem here sweetie
Hugs
Susan~~~
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Thank you for the wonderful comment on my poem, Susan. Happy to hear you enjoyed it. Don
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i prefare to think it is a little early morning delight, but even so my imagination shall run amoke every time i see a light on in the neighbours homes in the early hours of the morning thank you for sharing this with us and keep up the good work
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Thank you for the comment and compliments on my poem. Hapy to hear it was a good read for you. Don
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Wow~
Oh My this is a Beauty my Friend and what images You have brought forth much to feast upon
Oy!! Much can happen when the lights go out- some good while others no-
Excellent!!
Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet One
Best wishes in the contest too
with much love & light~ Desire~*~
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Thank you my dear friend for the compliments on my poem. Happy to hear you enjoyed it. Don
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Words and actions, yes if only they could be forgotten sometimes and yet if we hadn't said or done what then.a poem to ponder on during those wee small hours, Ros
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Thank you Ros for the compliments on my poem. Yes alot to ponder on. Don
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So creatively engaging.... x
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