Feel the breeze, Calculate the moment
Spread your wings, Let yourself soar
Don't look back, Just glide on
Away from old, Going towards new
Breeze becomes wind, Strong and unforgiving
Strength slipping away, Falling farther back
Adrenaline rushes through, Speed picks up
Hard at work, Forever pushing ahead
Just about there, Burst through barrier
Future in sight, Bad times over
Hard work pays, Now start again
Make everything better, A new beginning
Finally she's free
Bird fly away
A contest entry
- Found/Find/Finding Youself! (with 680 points) by Dreamer42morrow.
650 points, ended December 21, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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"Breeze becomes wind, Strong and unforgiving
Strength slipping away, Falling farther back" <<--This seems to happen to everyone, and it's what many are scared of in life. Excellent poem! It grasped my concept, and I loved the double meaning (could be a human going throught life or a bird in its first flight).
Thank you for entering, and good luck in the contest!
~Mariah!~
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