And I stop clinging to you,
instead relaxing comfortably in your arms.
The soft warmth wraps us up tight
and soothes us to sleep
and for just that second
we remember innocence..
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this is a nice smiling poem lol yeah to cuddle up and smile and laugh and recall other days, yeah, that's a good side of love.
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UHMAYZING!
I liked this alot!
It actually gave me some cold chills,
it reminded me to the time when i was young , and i was with my first love. Oh man the memories.
Wow, thank you so much for sharing this. I enjoyed this a great deal!
-Mandi
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I can see the image well in this one and can easily step into the piece. Unfortunately I am at a loss of what word you've used as a prompt in the contest. Should be seven letter words beginning with "H". Heater is only six so....
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Beautifully penned and filled with such innocence. This one reads almost like a lullaby. So sweet and gentle.
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Innocently beautiful; this is simply gorgeous
Best of Luck
♥
Stay safe
~Manda
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