When it rains here it lingers for many days
the wooden stairs swell in the fog
and even from way up,
Way up! at the top of this mountian.
it seems,
it seems,
There is no world beyond that fog,
and everythings going to be allright
A contest entry
- Picture Prompt III by Itzamna.
550 points, ended December 30, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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beautiful poem, and i love the title that you used for the poem. excelent work and good luck!
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lots of strong emotions displayed in this piece. great take on the prompt.
best of luck to you
andi
(redhanded)
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