Breathless I watch unnoticed
Forever invisible to you and your world
Knowledge that this will never be
My will can no longer move these feet
Sprawling eternity lay before us
Any and all things are possible under this star
One day in that distant future
Will we be together?
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amazing
i have to say, from what i have read of your work, it is something i want to see much more of, where did you ever get the inspiration? -
I like how you ended it with a question. Nice work
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this is like looking at someone and knowing they just don't understand you and might not even want to and yet...you still hope. Anyway, that's what I took away from the poem. A lot of thought went into it.
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nice
My name is Megan...poem is good. -
Who knows...
I love the rhythm of the poem and the wonder in the larger frame of time if anything is possible. I would like to think that it is.
Write on, poet.
Blessings,
Myth -
k, I like this one, a lot. Like a lot a lot =D
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Well done, well done my friend.
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I can relate to this write. It speaks of a love that you wish would be, but hasn't happened yet. There's a hopeful feel to this. Thanks for sharing.
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aw I like this write very much so.
well pen'd
best of luck iin the future.
andi
(redhanded)
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