Rolling clouds
over ominous waters,
telltale signs of a storm
brewing in a distance.
Old, gnarled, brittle sticks
cringe in terror
at the thought of destruction.
Nature's fury boiling...
Author notes
http://gilad.deviantart.com/art/Out-Of-My-Mind-32069871
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A contest entry
- Contest Challenge! You Think You Can Handle It? then Enter by AngelKat42.
2100 points, ended December 31, 2008, 13 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Bandit Appreciation!
Thank you for participating in this weeks Reading List with this lovely poem - your activity is appreciated
The Poetic Bandits
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This is a nice poem about the natural destruction of storms
very interesting personification too - congratulations on the silver trophy.
Polly
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fantastic imagery
this was great
congrats on the silver -
Outstanding
There is something very beautiful about a storm brooding in the distance and you capture this perfectly in this poem. What really stands out here is the imagery- strong and intense. Congratulations on the trophy.
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Amazing poem that you've written. I am so like wow right about now. the imagery you've created with your words is exceptional..
good luck
kat
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uuuuuuuuuuuuuummmm!!!! Well said, and truly fine... brings the reader up right close and personal. BRAVO!
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The image puts me in awe. I'd love to capture the environment in such a state. Your poem animates the image very well, something I appreciate. Love the break and personification of the sticks to drive home your view.
Very well done!
Best of luck in the contest!
s~w
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Very descriptive these few lines; certainly fit well with the picture prompt given in this contest. Wishing you well ...
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