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Ballerina's and Empty Threats

Stand tall
Turn out from the hip,
Don't lean against the wall
Do it right, or I'll get you with my whip
Don't be unbalanced and falling all over the hall
Try not to trip
Or I'll make you fall.

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http://brokendolz.deviantart.com/art/ballerinas-and-empty-threats-37746527

I tried, you can DQ if you like, I dont like it now that I've read it.

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  • lillypilly
    December 14, 2008
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    it's alright... you can have another go if you like... just edit it out lol