I need my red rose
shes pretty and will be there
to help me grow into someone good
she is my rose
She hurts me but its only a prick
But she always makes things better
I need her but she shall never know
that she is my rose
At the darkest parts of my life
she lights it up for the rest of the day
she lets me feel and know Im not alone
she is my rose
When I need her she is always there
she loves me alot and I never noticed That
she cares for me and trys her hardest because
she is my rose
I need her more than ever
in this tough time
I need u so much because
You are my rose
Author notes
This is too u Ivy im srry for always making You angry.Plzzz forgive me
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very nice poem any girl would be lucky to have such a beautiful poem in her honor loved it nice work
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a sweet plea for understanding
a nice honourable moment of appreciation those that care that deal with all that we go through
a beautiful picture of love and friendship and compassion
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You know you don't ever have to ask for my forgiveness, Nick. It is always there. You didn't make me mad. I was just frustrated. Love you. And, I like the poem, your style is changing, it's good.
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