In full color like sunshine over a flower
Deep and empty like a fathomless breeze
It’s the sparkle that has set in your eyes
Navy blue, and crisp like the sea
Not far from here, I get lost in a delirious wonder
It was much like swimming in saltwater
Burning the smallest of cuts, but as refreshed as fresh does
A red balloon wanders by and its one more cup of time
Don’t say the last adieu, just give me whimsical
Give me broken like a record, let me read lips
I have a sound memory when I close my eyes
But it’s just an illusion of the sun rising when you blink
And here I am waiting like a fly in that last second of life
I don’t want to die, and be the caprice of diluted suicides
You,
Just a boy
It really is too bad you were beautiful
Author notes
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7GhZygigFSI : Oxygen - Colbie Caillat
A contest entry
- What's On My Ipod by Cannonsfire.
1750 points, ended December 23, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I really like where you took this song. Thanks for the entry
C


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you really know how to set the tone... It’s the sparkle that has set in your eyes
Navy blue, and crisp like the sea
great read.. best of luck in your endeavor!

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Good luck your song is OXYGEN - COLBIE CAILLAT
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