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Three hearts beating as one
loving
Three dreams separate yet combined
hoping
Three people walking in different worlds
lost
Three minds racing to help
finding
Three sets of hands reaching out
helping
Three people
one

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  • Rev Alimae gold member
    July 19

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    Intriguing

    M'Lady Sunduiri,

    One would believe from reading such that you are of the mind that only through that of shared pain, loss, destitution and mutual sorrow can peace of heart, mind and soul be found.
    My beautiful friend, these aspects may have had a place with in thy life previously, pulling thee down, devouring all of thy inner world, allowing you to close of, pull away and hide. But let me assure thee that t'is only through that of finding thyself, seeking the truth of "You" and leaving behind that of what all want you to be, that thee will find thy peace. Forge thine own destiny. Become that for which thee are.

    Rev. Alimae

    P.S.

    Your literary use of language with in this piece is very thought provoking and heart felt. I applaud you for placing to written prose thy inner thoughts.

    *smiles*