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I dont wanna keep you

I dont wanna keep you
but i want you
i need you
gotta have you

I dont wanna keep you
but its all i know
keeping you
keeps me
Alive

I dont wanna keep you
in something you know nothing about
trapped
in a heart you want nothng to do with

I dont wanna keep you
and i never have
truth is
I always wanted to keep you
i just never got the chance

Author notes

if you confused its about a girl who dreams about a boy being her own and her not wanting to love him, but in reality she was never with him.

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  • Walking Oxymoron gold member
    December 15, 2008

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    keeping you
    keeps me
    Alive

    That's so sad!! An I know exactly what that's like. A longing that is always tehre...
    Aw...
    Excelletn work!