Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

For Kaci

When we first met
you gave me hope to a strange town
you introduced me to the most awsome guy around

you first heartbreak sucks
but with that are many others
I've been through it all
so a shoulder I will be for you
and a true friend i shall remain

when everyone has turned their back
thats when you learn to realize
you your true friends are

your an awsome friend
and im here for you
cause I know that if it were'nt for you
I'd be more lost than now

I'll stand by your side when everything goes wrong
and lift you up when you fall
and when your in the spotlight
I'll be there cheering you on

don't worry what tomorrow brings
cause tomorrows never that long
an eternity from now
everything will be forgotton about
but our friendship shall always remain

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • Janice M Pickett
    January 29, 2009

    Edit | Reply
    This is a kind and loving poem for a friend. Really nice. It shows your compassion and inteligence. You make a really good friend. Well done.


  • storiesuntold
    January 28, 2009

    Edit | Reply

    Awesome

    So true to always hold your friends close and know in the hard times you will see who your truest friends are and be that friend to them as well . Great write