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Where Do You Go

Time,Time
Where do you go
When I was young
you where so slow
Now that I'm old
You go by so fast
The present is here for a second


Then its the past

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  • albymyheart gold member
    December 14, 2008

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    So true. My days already go by so fast I sometimes wonder how short they will feel in ten years time. The thought bothers me. Well done...alby