look at those
dirty. pretty. e/y/e/s
see those
dirty. pretty. t/h/e/i/g/h/s
she is the
most. beautiful. m/i/s/t/a/k/e
that you'll ever
make
c.i.g.g.a.r.e.t.t.e.s
and
c.a.n.d.y d.r.o.p.s
take a taste
bet you
c.a.n.t s/t/o/p
delicous skin
her smokey
h.a.z.e
just pulls you
in
now you d a z e
h/e/r/r/o/i/n/e and c.o.c.a.i.n.e
the room is spinning
and
you wonder
if you'll see
her
a.g.a.i.n
c.h.a.m.p.a.n.g.e and
f a s t c a r s
you wonder what
she has done
to come
so f a r
p.o.m.e.g.r.a.n.a.t.e
lip s/t/a/i/n
covers up
her life's
s t r a i n
wake up
from this dream
seems it was
all a
s/c/e/n/e
no more
senseless
lust
now it's all
turned to
d u s t
tears are
f a l l i n g
her world's calling
the s.t.a.r.s
are getting d/i/m
but it seems
you can't
c o m e i n
what to do
you have no
c/l/u/e
i guess it's over
now
- A Dirty Pretty Group group list • next in list
A contest entry
- DIRTY [P.r.e.t.t.y] WHORE by Candy Morphine.
550 points, ended January 6, 34 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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agree with neverxgoodxenough the way it was written made it seemed fast past...great write.
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The format of this poem seemed desperate, and made me want to read quickly. good job.
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This is such a good dirty-pretty. Wonderful, you painted the page with your words. Keep up the great work, love.
~ToxicSuicide.
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Wow!
Awesome!
How interesting!
You fascinate me so much, my dear!
What a dirty pretty piece!
Kisses all over you, sweet girl!
Galaxy2
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excellent~
You described this so on target...
I too like the line wake up from this dream and her world is calling the stars......different too......
Best of luck in the contest
This is a winner in my book.......
Hugs
Susan~~~
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I really like this poem, my favorite part is
wake up
from this dream
seems it was
all a
s/c/e/n/e
no more
senseless
lust
now it's all
turned to
d u s t
The whole poem is really good but this is my favorite part. Great write
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i like it.
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wow
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So that's what dirty pretty is. I like it. Very good poem!!!
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well done
I really liked this. It flows well. Good rhythm. Good occasional rhyme. Good idea with good development. Good and imaginative form.
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NOthing but the truth... LOVE IT
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terrific
it's over
those words ring so clear
but
i forget where
this is a first place poem
i love the format
the beat
the theme
everything about it
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Very Dirty Pretty
I admit I didnt know what dirty pretty was until you told me...and this is something you do so well. I don'yt understand why people have such a problem with such poems (NO DP) I'm like let people write how they are talented, but I do understand rules for contests, cause I can't stand free flow, but anyway this was awesome....you go!!!
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