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Dreams

Sailing swiftly away across oceans 
Through an ancient stone age dawn
Aloft on wings so high

Into dreams beyond all care
The sounds of flutes and drums
In the air
In the air
The sounds of flutes and drums

Walking across these fields of dreams
Of sine waves and algebraic themes
In the scheme of things

Into dreams beyond all care
The sounds of flutes and drums
In the air
In the air
The sounds of flutes and drums

And things will never be the same
Caught between the sunshine and rain
In these dreams, sweet sweet dreams

Into dreams beyond all care
The sounds of flutes and drums
In the air
In the air
The sounds of flutes and drums

Dancing around bonfires under the stars
Making fire signs in the night air 
We are here and here we are...

Into dreams beyond all care
The sounds of flutes and drums
In the air
In the air
The sounds of flutes and drums...

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  • Walking Oxymoron gold member
    December 15, 2008

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    Aw.... I'd love to hear the melody in this, it sounds like a song!
    The sort of song you could fall asleep to, (to chill you out- not because it's boring!!)
    Great write- lovely imagery, good tone...
    Wonderful work.