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The Rose of Versailles

This requiem put in fragile serenity
by this revenant choir mourning in lyrical sympathia
...for we gather for the funeral
...of the rose of Versailles.

Author notes

short thoughts note done i wont come around to finishing i have to much stress on myself to do much lately.

its about the death of love or the rose of versailles

in june i will be headed off to military school for a year in a half aswell so after june u wont hear from me for a while.

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  • WOW

    Im speechless...


  • myusikah
    December 15, 2008

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    That's beautiful! I've been to Versailles, it's a nice town. I love the vocabulary - absolutely stunning. ^_^

    -->pia♫♪


    • Medina Regal
      December 22, 2008
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      an omg you've been to versailles?

      ...lol RICH!

      • myusikah
        December 22, 2008
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        Sure. Ehehe. Not really. It was a school trip...optional, only for Gifted Magnet. My mom got it as a B-day present for me - a trip there. In any way, me and ephemeral-happiness got stuck in the hall of mirrors once. It was a crackup. It's not just a hall, it's like, a palace with bedrooms n' shiteSz.

        Oh, and thanks for the comment on Sky-Painted Literature.

        ~.^

        -->pia♫♪


    • Medina Regal
      December 15, 2008
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      lol thank you.

  • Sky Prince Ireland gold member
    December 15, 2008

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    Kind of short Daniel but a good start. I'll miss you when you leave. Your writing is wonderful. I hope you manage to find time to write while you're in school or when you visit your family. Best wishes to you.
    Brian

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