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Freedom from Sanity

Nothing expected lying in my bed.
Darkness muffles my insanity.
Senseless joyless patronized and fed.
No hope or reason binding me.

I forgot who I was,
though I can't remember why.
Sorrow fills me because
the shackled billions cry.


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  • She Stole My Voice
    December 15, 2008

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    "I forgot who I was,
    though I can't remember why."

    That's my favorite.
    Thank you for entering and good luck ♥


  • ladyhelenaofsorrows
    December 14, 2008

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    i really, really like this. the title pulls you in, and imagery is great throughout. the last line was my favorite. excellent write!