you entered my world so fragile and precious
kissed so tenderly
repeated those ancient words consistantly
depression overcame me
you were there through the first trial
gone the next
but, oh, what?
you said you still loved me?
Bullshit! my gut screamed
but i gave you the chance to love me again
all these events led me to this moment
when i realise without a tiny doubt
you are simply living your life like your dream,
an act.
what did u think, what does this mean to u
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Oh. This is a sad little poem that you have going on here.
It sounds like you're going through a very common trial that we all go through in life, love lost. It's such a hard thing to experience but I think it makes us stronger in the end. Not that it makes it any easier to deal with. Lestways, that' s what I think. I thought you did a good job of expressing yourself here. 
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why did you post this poem DID I DO SOMETHING WRONG?
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wow... i really love this poem...
to me this states how people dont appreciate what they have until it gone... like a child who gets tired of a toy, throws it on the ground, walks away, and then a little while later decides they want to play again....
people feel as if that one person will always be waiting for them, that because they say that they love you, that you will just stand there looking up at the sky while they go do whatever.... people deserve better.
thats a lesson ive had to learn the hard way
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