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mixed up poetry madness

"the hunt begins"

                      why did you leave me

                                                more then a tiny bit

                                                                          My love for you is just like this,

it lights lanterns & fires,

                                  Then beat me around,

                                                                my special place

                                                                                        leave me alone

Love is like a shower of stars.

                                          Confusion sweeps over me again

Author notes

please not i fixed up old spelling errors. (ie. some poems i spelt like= lyk)
poems used:-
un finished
why did u leave me
a candle for Camm
Life & love
my fairy dust (the secret behind it-shh-)
Dad
my special place
stop hurting me
Life & love
my mind right now (not a poem really my mind)

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