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Control Does Not Mean Control

Chained to the bed, you can't see a thing
No clue as to what I might bring

Excitement and lust heightens every desire
With every movement, its makes you higher

I walk up to you and kiss your lips
And stroking your nipples making them hard tips

A soft moan creeps up deep within your throat
I have this whole night of lust to devote

Moving from your lips down to your hardness
My fingers and tongue did it caress

Making you harder and filled with lust
A nice deep moan and a little bit of a thrust

I stop and grab it, making you crave
"I make the rules here, ok slave?"

"Yes, mistress" you manage to say
I take off the blind fold and you love the display

Black corset with my breasts pushed upward
But my black thong is what you most adored

I sit on your set and move my hips slow
Making your manhood only grow

Moving my panties aside and letting you feel
Inching it in and making you squeal

It ignites my body with flames of passion
Dominance is all you see, no compassion

My wetness makes it easy to slide around
As your continue to squirm but it's hard when your bound

I move faster and harder, making you squirm
The more I move, the more you become firm

I untie your hands and grab a hold of your wrists
You told me tight and begin to twist

Suddenly your on top and in control
I like the sudden reverse in roles

With me on my knees, I'm helpless to your whims
As you grab hold of all my limbs

"Don't like it now, do ya, bitch?"
"No, master" I feel your cock twitch

As it rams into me with full force
You love me hard with no remorse

My hair in your hands and pulling hard
This unexpected act, I was caught off guard

Making me more wet with every last thrust
My body is on fire with so much lust

Your fingers stroke my feminine folds
As my climax slowly starts to unfold

Screaming in pleasure as well as in pain
Total control is what you try to gain

Covering my mouth and muffling the sound
One good thrust and it was all over now

"Shut up, bitch. You'll talk when I say"
I had no choice but to obey

My climax drawing near and my body shaking
My body was all yours for the taking

My eyes close and mind goes black
I've never been loved like that

You say "You still have alot to learn"
Come here, slave, it's your turn"

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  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    December 21, 2008

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    Wow, lovely work here and I love the domination in this. Very creative and well thought out. All the best to you in this contest and I hope that you do well with it! Take care and thanks for sharing it!




    Jeremy0826

  • eyelids shut
    December 18, 2008
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    nice story


  • darell
    December 15, 2008

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    Bravo!

    A seductive tale of domination
    and roleplaying told with intimate
    details. I loved the entire story.
    I could follow with ease.
    Your words were passionately
    enchanting. Alluring me into
    your web of sensual delights.
    Well done my fellow poet