silent screams,
are broadcast to the world,
but are carried away by the wind.
i shierk as he clutches my wrists,
and one by one,
craves upon them,
leaving the blood to slither down my pale skin.
i try to run; but do not succeed,
he yanks my silky black hair,
dragging me back to him.
i cry for him to stop,
as he slices up my skin,
he refuses and continues stabbing the blade into my flesh.
the moon shinning like a candle lit flame of sadness in the sky,
makes this scene grim.
finally he aggressively pushes me to my knees,
my blood and tears rinse together,
falling silently to the ground.
he pulls my black hair away from my shoulders,
brushing his fingers gently against my cheeks.
slowly he puts the blade to my neck,
i beg for him not to do it; for him to spare me.
he shook his head and whispered goodbye.
forcefully he slices the blade into my neck.
as my lifeless body falls to the cold ground,
his body shakes as he drops the knife,
running away from this bloody scene.
because tonight,
my friend for life murdered me...
Author notes
Woooow. :] Ummm, so yes, this a poem about a murder. The person who murdered the girl was her best (guy) friend 
... Maybe because she loved someone else and not him? or maybe because he had split personallites? ;D well, you'll never know. the imagery (sp O.O) for the girl is what i loook like :3 it got me more into the poem (more inimate with hehe). This would have be loads better if i had the first verison, but my brother delated so i had to start over, and i didn't remember the first one, because i did half asleep at 12 am. o.o Ummmmmmmm. Hope you like!!! :}}}}}
we cry tears of ashes
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Love The Feeling of shivers..
This one gave me the shivers..and really that doesn't happen that offten but this one did the trick,and dont tell me you arn't that good your poems are awsome I love them.
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its good but morbidly an unpoeticly scary...but cmon...ur 11...
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o.o... lol, i know. ii did this 'cause i got bored, it's not like the rest of my poetry. :] thankksz.
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well atleast ur not like those 11 year olds who wanna die an commit suicide.
dont become depressed until you turn 13.lol
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This is very dark and morbid... But as a person that is what I am i am dark and morbid myself and what is weird i felt like it was me because i am also someone with black hair and pale skin. I really sunk into this poem and enjoyed it alot but if I had to guess I would say it was more along the lines of the person was secretly in love with you but you loved someone else so if he couldnt have you then no one else could...All in all i love it!!! Very good write!
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Thank yoou. :]
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um this is scary.not very poetic.kinda sounds like a sick fantasy.i liked the first 3 lines then you kinda lost me.
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uhh that was the point? thanks. o.o
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WTF? That's all I can say at the moment.
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O.O ummm okaay.
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