The scene in your bedroom is set,
the taste of your flesh is mouth watering,
the sound of your voice is mesmerizing.
my fingers gliding down your back,
feeling your soft skin under my nails.
seductive smiles and sensational shivers,
whispering in your ear,
tasting your neck.
the feeling of being so close to you,
warms up my body.
slipping my fingers threw your hair,
as you brush my scarlet cheeks.
the taste of your lips on mine,
feeling your tongue slither passed my lips.
the feelings shooting through my veins right now,
there are no words for how you’re making me feel.
Author notes
lol... pleaseee pleaseee don't eat meeee. Of course i know things like this -^.^-. this wasn't for anyone i know, i don't think i'd do thatat 11 O.O... i did this poem because i wanted to, plus i was really bored so chyeaah =)... thanks for read, and remember noo eating me!!! :3 loveee you.
swing swing from the tangles of my heart
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Nice write. You wrote "there are no words for how you’re making me feel." but you did a pretty good job right here.
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I love this one, I started thinking of my hunny when I read this. lol Awesom
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wow...you're only 11? and you wrote this. haha im impressed, when i was 11 i didnt even think of writing lol. good job, and yea, start out telling the boys no early, lol. :]
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Hey there, very good for 11, no one should "Eat you" haha. hope your not letting boys try anything though, teach em who's boss early good job -AwesomeJoshsome
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o.o lol thanks and of course not. thanks again ^.^
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wow.
for an 11 year old you did well in this format. in the 3rd from last line, i would change slither to slip though. it just sounds better that way.
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o.o thanks ;D
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