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His words

(I ADMIRE YOU)

but you disregarded my feelings
manipulated my mind
to satisfy your twisted needs

(YOU ARE SO TALENTED)

but you tore apart my ideas
insulted my intelligence
rejected any opinion not your own

(YOU ARE THE MOST AMAZING WOMAN I KNOW)
and I thought the same of you
but I realize now
I never knew you at all

(I JUST WANT TO TREAT YOU LIKE THE QUEEN YOU ARE)
but you used me
made me your emotional whore
your mental concubine

(YOU ARE BEAUTIFUL)
perhaps
but you don't deserve to look at me
to have me in your mind

(WE SHARE A CONNECTION)
sure we do, I suppose
because you made damn sure
that you could set one up

(YOU HAVE NO REASON TO BE INSECURE WITH ME)
no, no reason
other than all the lies
that you convinced me were the truth

(YOU HAVE NOTHING  TO BE ASHAMED OF)
no, nothing...
nothing
except putting my trust in you

(I'VE NEVER FELT THIS WAY BEFORE)
now this
I do believe....
do you even feel at all?

(YOU HAVE NO IDEA HOW MUCH YOU MEAN TO ME)
but the thing is
I do...
the answer is nothing

(YOU'RE THE ONLY ONE I WANT)
but you said that to her
a fifteen-year-old girl
and she believed you too

(I WILL NEVER HURT YOU)
but you did
more deeply than you will ever know
than i will ever tell you

(I'M SORRY)
and I agree
you are
you are so very sorry....

(I LOVE YOU)
but you don't
you never did
and yet it still hurts so much to know this.

Author notes

I know this sucks. It's to cleanse me of a recent relationship. The words in bold are things he said to me repeatedly, and my responses are a striking back of kind now.

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Comments

  • Little Lilly Angel
    July 22, 2009

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    i was really moved by the words and the flow and the feel of this poem i loved it a really good write!!

  • BIO-Dex
    July 16, 2009

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    Astounding

    This moved me. Your writing style is in a fashion that I havent encountered before but which you carry well.


  • emorat94
    December 14, 2008

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    I thought it was amazing. I just got out of a relashionship that was exactly like that and i know what you are feeling.