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12/14/08 #2

The house, with the light, shining through the night
From the one window, with bars, the light wants to go far
Inhibited, by steel, this  light's far from real
It's awesome, held back, with no sign of slack
The steel, it bends, impossible to mend
The light, breaks free, the whole world sees
The truth, freedom, far from wrong, singing, singing, the purest song

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  • newnoakua
    January 12

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    Wow, interesting rhyme scheme. I can't quite put my finger on it, but this piece is great.

    Great job!