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The outcast

An outcast
in the fierce felling sun,
nowhere to hide,
nowhere to run.

Her heart tied down
by chains of sorrow,
an empty shell beating
uneven and hollow
against the chamber walls,
no one to answer
any of her calls.

Hiding in the shadow of light
Alone.
No one to talk to,
No one calls on the phone.

Blinded by her own lies
building in spite
blood stained tears
flow from her sad eyes
flowering on her thighs
until she finally
dies ...

Helpless, shivering, cold
in despair, a spirit was sold.
For her, the sorrow she will keep.
In heaven, the angels weep.

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  • Humm..There is a Indian proverb that this world can leave you alone, but Almighty never do it,HE is more near when you are alone....


  • nilav
    January 2
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    the unbearable pain of loneliness well expressed here and the other words spill grief too....


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    December 19, 2008

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    The tragedy in this reaches beyond the page and settles itself in my heart; this is an excellent poem

    In the second line I think you mean 'feeling'

    Thank You & Best of Luck
    Stay safe
    ~Manda