There's animals in my soup again
I'm not sure just where to begin
first it was only sheep there
then cows, horses and a bear
a hippo came, sit right down
then some cats and a hound
how soon will I be able to eat
they're taking a bath, I see their feet
no one believes me, it's a sin
now it's happened yet again
Author notes
next time check to see what's in YOUR soup
This honor's Animal Cracker in My Soup
the art was a gift from a friend
Please tell me what you think
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LOL, you are becomming the food king of poetry! You really did a wonderful job on this rhyming couplet poem. A delightful read!
Love,
Amera
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Hehe nice poem!
Love the humour, it fits
in well the the pic!
Wonderfully done!
Thanks for entering & best of luck
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Beats out the old waiter,there's a fly in my soup routine.
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Smile!
Happy and silly -- thank you for writing it!
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I have seen alphabet soup..Why not animal soup? Cute poem.....The children and we adults need to read the humorous side....Well written!
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love it
great piece want to come to lunch at your house!!!
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Thank You
At my house - you never know whom will show up - or what
or what I might fix.- then again - neither do I - it's part of what I like about the uncertanties of life - take nothing for granted but enjoy each day
Thanks Again
W. W.
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Silly and funny!
Nice work! Good luck in the contest!
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Thank YOU
for both the contest and your comments
The world needs more 'minutes of silly' so we can all balance the serious stuff.
Thanks for the Bronze
Wind Walker
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