Whats this you say,
Why are you talking this way?
No, it can't be,
You just told me you loved me.
Don't lie to me,
It's only going to hurt, can't you see?
I can't believe this,
This can't exist.
Someone just told me they loved me,
I don't agree.
Why can't I believe them,
Where's the judgement in him?
So, the bruises and scares have healed,
And nothing's been revealed.
Everything's getting hazy,
am I going crazy?
Oh, how I ache,
this must be a mistake.
But what hurt's so much,
Is when I feel his touch.
What takes me by surprise,
Is that, these are not lies.
And what is so hard to believe true,
Is that, I love him too.
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Written February 8th, 2004
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wow i love this peice very nice kinda explains hoe i felt once well written
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OUT STANDING The feeling................... the the emotion in this was just....... for lack of words I will say it again out standing
I loved it keep up the good work
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Hey gurl,
I like/liked your poem, the flow was great(like GuardHeart said). I understand everything that you are saying. IM me when you get the chance I would really like to talk to you again it's been a long time.
Lovies Always,
Chea -
Nice poem with much feeling and sensitivity. You write well and from the heart, putting your everyday experiences into your work. Well done.
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i liked it the flow was awesome. great write keep it up. EaRiNe!!!!
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This poem is SO the heart of a girl!! I can completely and totally relate to the emotions, and stuff. i have never had a guy love or even "like" me, but i can understand the emotions involved. good flow.
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