If I am agony
then you love pain.
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I really like this idea. But the title sucks!! Suggestions?
A contest entry
- Pre-write Contest: Love Poetry by Nicole Hanna.
15000 points, ended January 28, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What about the title?!
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Oh, but if you feel like you need to add something, to make it... meatier, I guess.... reconsider the title. Make the title it's own line, and have it lead into the other two lines.
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lol. That's the thing. Sometimes, two lines says what needs to be said. Don't feel compelled to add to it, unless it comes naturally. Trust me, forcing more will make it suck (which I am SO guilty of), and this doesn't suck. I like it.
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I cant give much help to you... I think you should leave it how it is I think its kind of nice... It was a good poem! i really like this type of poetry!
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This is GREAT!
Some of the greatest writes are brief & potent & this is one of those! I think you might want to retitle this however.
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You're right!!
Some suggestions would be welcome!! I am awful at titles...!
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