Tadpoles skate smoothly
Across pure crystal water
Wisps of leaves briefly linger
Like the soft touch of lips
The couple share
Hands dance
Around the coarse bark
Of the willow
Author notes
This was for a quickie contest. 
Thanks for the link, Ylova! 
xx
A contest entry
- come on i want to feel the passion by ruthie fallen angel.
700 points, ended December 16, 2008, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - [15:30] prompt QUICKIE! :) by etoile.
625 points, ended December 14, 2008, 15 entries
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This is real bad. *blush*
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UMMMM
i guess i could put somthing fancy but thats not me
all in all this poem was just sick
its one of those poemes that you wish you wrote great job =D -
very short, however an exceptionally good poem! No question about it! loved it, loved it!
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this is not bad! the imagery is beautiful, and it's written very well. i adore the last three lines, they're beautiful. great take on the prompt by the way.
thanks for entering and goodluck
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This is great! I loved ice skating as a kid. This kind of reminded me of it and brought back some great memories. Beautiful imagery here and good luck to you!
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I love the imagery in this piece. Well done and best to you in the contest
Best wishes,
Ylova
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good job and good luck
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Thanks! xx
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beautiful! i absolutly love this poem. =)
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