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Sugar.

She's beautiful, she's original
She'll say anything; do anything -
With a dick, that is,
Which is the main problem.
I'm a virgin, sixteen year old lesbian
With a mad, insatiable crush -
On my luscious best friend
Sugar.
Can't touch her, can't taste her,
Can't kiss her, can't love her.
I want her, but I can't have her.

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Based on the TV series, Sugar Rush!

A contest entry

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  • livingItup
    December 16, 2008

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    Great but sad

    this is really good for a quickie.
    i love it.
    but its also sad.
    not to have the one you most need.
    hmm but i loved this. good luck =^;^=


  • xDemonicxAngelx
    December 14, 2008

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    I actually liked this, very different but it works so well. You did a good job on this one. Thank you for entering and good luck!

    Take care


  • chilali
    December 14, 2008

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    Whoa. Interesting take on the prompt love. Hehe. Good luck in the contest.

    Best wishes,
    Ylova


  • hamstarhymes
    December 14, 2008

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    frustration in a nutshell. nice to see this honest rant post all the fluffy stuff out there. and hope sugar gets some sense.