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Weak and Trembling

I could feel your presence
You have your own special manly fragrance
I should have never let you in my mind
Even if you had always been kind
All these things I notice and remember
Your touch makes me tremble
The thought alone makes me weak
I almost feel like a freak
Thinking of you I am awake
Not thinking of you I am asleep
All the while I fake
That this really doesn't go down deep
That your just a friend
I'm torturing me..... when oh when will it end?

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  • Zane Rose
    January 7

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    I know that exact feeling. Very well written. I enjoyed reading this. Good job, good luck, and keep up the great writing!
    ~AEO


  • Content
    December 14, 2008
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    another one of those poems i doubt ull explain the meaning to


    • ruthie fallen angel
      December 14, 2008
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      nope i was bored and looking through old things on my hard drive i wrote this like over the summer