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Death

Here I lay dying time to say
good bye bye you bastard
who beat me down you were
pieces of shit and I got a crown

A contest entry

just lonely and looking for someone to care

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  • badnovocaine
    December 14, 2008
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    I feel an angry gust of wind coming through my window, with sinister ice creeping up my windows.
    LOL no just kidding, I really liked this write, and how you ended this really PACKED a punch, I liked.

    I know below your author notes say just lonely and looking for someone to care,
    well I will give you hug

    Even if its only through the internet.
    Thanks for the entry.