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Friends are important

Written with a pen,
Sealed with a kiss,
If you are my friend please answer this,
Are we friends or are we not?
You told me once, but I forget,
And if I die before you.
I will go to heaven and wait for you,
Friends are important.

Author notes

Friends are really great to be with.
Written February 8th, 2004

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  • Lioness
    November 8, 2005
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    I like this, but I feel like the last line isn't needed. just end it with "wait for you" it would sound perfect. but it's your poem so you don't have to. that's just an opinion. I like the poem though. You did a great job.
    Lovies.