Theres a sadness inside of me.
A madness buried so deep,
I'm scared to let it out for people to see
Worried what it will turn me to be.
I think if I go to that place
that dark evil place,
the fury will come out in waves,
and my face will start to change,
from smile to sneer to rage.
the anger will be off the page
and my heart will start to race
beating at a different pace.
you better give me some space
As my voice changes range
From high to deep I'm at the stage
I'm about to explode in rage!
Like an animal that has been caged,
starved and covered in paint
humiliated! Played as a game
that is the weight of this pain
that I carry as a pair of reigns
pulling me back as I start to gain
love hope and change
but I feel as if I'm chained
Cause I'm fuckin angry again.
I'm starting to feel the strain
I'm praying to god to be slain
A bullet penetrate my brain.
to die an awful death
please, lead me from the misery
this feeling isn't imaginary
while I talk about it beautifully
You will understand if you listen to me!
Comments
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My first impression
is You seem
very angry
weather its at someone
or yourself??....
But i cnat really tell in here.
But Its a great write
it has an amazing flow to it,
And if you ever need
to talk i dont usly have alot
of awncers
But Im always here......
But really such a great write
Sincerly~Emogirlinpain
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very strong write
well express, you carry the reader right through the poem
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amazing
hey thanks for the earlyer comment i loved you poem not realy much i would change great poem
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I love it. I'm going through the same problem, kind of, so i know what you mean. This poem is great! You do need someone to lead out of all that shit. And maybe there isn't anyone around that will take you away from it all. It may sound strange, but if you want, you can always talk to me. I know how bad things can be, and sometimes i wont know how to help, but i try my hardest.
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