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Evolution

Gelatin valleys content in nostalgia
It's eating the villagers alive
Those far off dark nights
And mild air on the cheeks
    Corrode
The castle I built here

Gears turning left and right
to the beat of an elevator dirge
No tie, but the hypothetical one
    Choking
It may be homicide

When the gasoline that fueled
This futile quest
Was exchanged for the cheaper
  Harder to get
  Better for you
Oxygen

The dolls I set at the table
Pecked out their own eyes
And sit there, waiting
For the signal

To live

Author notes

A metaphoric reflection about what has all changed these past few months. I know it's not great, or good, or even worth reading... but it's there.

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