Freedom is the lack of debt
allows you to do as you please
we are all chained by gravity
but one can move about with ease
This is heaven on Earth
we try so hard to make it hell
Author notes
prompt:
“No one is free, even the birds are chained to the sky.”
-Bob Dylan
A contest entry
- 20-40 Words by She Stole My Voice.
400 points, ended December 15, 2008, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I like this.
Thank you for entering and good luck ♥ -
nice right, makes you think about why we do things. Probably because we dont really think until after we've done them
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Thank you, life is such that everything is not perfectly planed or defined. My best wishes.
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