When I hear your voice
you touch me with your magic
call me anytime you like
me to lose you would be tragic
on the line I shall linger
the sweet tones of your voice
phone me when you can love
My heart does seldom wander
mind is blank just for you
is not what I had planned
in this world so full of blue
a perfect place is hard to find
better than what I have known
place me in your heart so kind
Author notes
I have used the first word style: When you call me on the phone, my mind is in a better place.
A contest entry
- Constantly Overcoming by Byepolar bare.
675 points, ended December 20, 2008, 13 entries
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Meter-riffic
You even got meter in you acrostic message! The meter in the poem was a little awkward because of the odd number of lines, but that was great. -
Beautifully Intoxicating!!!
Wishing you all the best!!! 
Peace & hugs always, xx Cyn 
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Thank you kind lady, my best wishes always.
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The message in this is very sweet and strong. I love how it ties in with sentence at the front of the line.
Well penned,
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hmmm the flow here a bit more jagged than what ive come to expect from your writings, but the sentiment is clear
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Thank you, I don't have expectations as I write from the heart. My best wishes.
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