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Monkey on My Back




I’m the monkey on your back
don’t worry every thing is cool
I’ll wait till you fall asleep
and teach you a lesson fool

There is no need for concern
we ride upon everyone
we just lay low all day
waiting for the setting sun

We take over your world
when the night comes rushing in
and leave you bewildered in the morning
as to where in the world have you bin





































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  • spiritualangel
    December 23, 2008

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    We take over your world
    when the night comes rushing in
    and leave you bewildered in the morning
    as to where in the world have you bin

    Beautifully penned. Best of Luck.


    • Topaze
      December 23, 2008
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      Thank you very much, my best wishes. Merry Christmas.


  • BluesMan gold member
    December 17, 2008
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    I can definately identify with this one Heheh My monkey has been asleep fo over two and a half years now.

    • Topaze
      December 17, 2008
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      Thank you, hope he doesn't wake up. My best wishes.


  • EeyoreUK
    December 14, 2008

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    hmmm slightly lost for words with this one...I'll just leave it at that

    • Topaze
      December 14, 2008
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      Thank you, so are monkeys. My best wishes.

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