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Stoked the fire at 0*
more awake then asleep
br...

Warm hazelnut sipped
to the mornings frigid air.

Listening to her song
in snore, in my bed.

Where she rests her head
from long nights with...

Ned 

Tactile Deprivation
no more -



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  • albymyheart gold member
    February 25, 2009
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    O...very nice. "Tactile Deprivation no more -" just finishes it off nicely...alby


  • CandiKisses
    December 18, 2008
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    Very Nice!!

    A lucky girl indeed who has a man who refers to her snoring as her "song"!


  • Simone Brooklyn
    December 14, 2008

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    Hahah, I like how you sort of built up the anticipation between "long nights with" and "Ned." I like this one.