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Hurt

Why do you speak to me that way
You hurt my feelings each and everyday
You always twist it and say it's me
It seems as if everything will be fault for eternity
I am sad most of the time
Can't you see
You just leave me here where I lie
With tears pouring from my eyes
Will you ever see my pain
Or will you just keep driving me insane

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Written February 8th, 2004

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  • P. W. Blackwell
    February 23, 2006
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    hey
    i've been down that road with to many guys that's why i say "It's all Good," that's my new favorite saying and hell it is all good in the end right? I miss you to It's all good it's really about a guy i had a song in my head that i wrote and those are the words you know how it is when you get a song in your head and have to sing it even if it don't make sense it will in the end
    tori


  • Lioness
    November 8, 2005
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    I know how you feel. Remember zach? he made me feel like that all the time. things will get better, I promise. but, hey, at least you got a good poem out of this ordeal.
    Lovies,