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Her Special Day Gone Awry

It was supposed to be a special day
Her special day
That ended in bloodshed
The groom brutally slaughtered in front of her
The brides mother with a knife in her back
The only remaining survivors
Were her and her faithful tabby.

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  • PoeticMadnesss
    February 23

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    whooaaaa i never thought about writing a murder poem regarding a wedding. it was a brilliant idea, really well done. keep up the great job!


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    December 19, 2008

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    Whoa ~

    The length of this piece works well as the strength of imagery and emotions bursts out clearly in just a short time

    Excellent write

    Thank You & Best of Luck
    Stay safe
    ~Manda