sweeping, soaring, shimmering
opulently resonating glorious space
roundly roaring brass
taught clattering drums
unite pearlescent woodwind
raise triumphant sound
lowering peaceful round
piano enters inscribes
billowing bass
trembling treble
glistering
cascading
pounding
relentless clustering cataract
voices resounding
memories stored
held
lived in
limitless wonders repeated.
A contest entry
- Shrt nvt nly by cadaver mentality.
1550 points, ended December 18, 2008, 3 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
How was it for you?
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Forty-five words to describe the auditory and visual spectacle of the symphony. If that had been your intention you would have done well.
The extended metaphor could be fitted to so many areas of life that it could encapsulate life itself.
I especially liked the words that highlighted the visual aspect of the making of music, (Whatever type you were writing about).
Very impressive. camen -
Wow this is amazing. It truly is beautiful sympony! Great job
and good luck!
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Thank you for entering.
I will reserve comments until contest is closed. camen
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Great work my friend! You really described the sound and feel of the symophony. Excellent!
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Oooh. This is absolutely beautiful. I love this. I played the violin a long time ago...
Sometimes I wonder why I quit.
Best of luck in the contest.
Write on.
~*~SP~*~
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Ah. Truly a Symphony.
You instigated in me the need to hear a full brass orchestra. Joy of voices and of instruments in full harmony.
Very well written, Poet.
Love
Myra
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