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Love Intertwined

 

 

Eyes of emeralds interlock
revealing motives our hearts dare not speak aloud.


Like feathers dancing across velvet skin,
gentle hands trail off into tousled ebony hair.


Silken petals caress weary bodies
that shiver with bliss.

A tremulous wave of sighs
escape from fervent lips of desire.


Tender, whispered emotions are unveiled,
sending currents of electric rapture

that pulsate through the marrow of our bones
and linger on the tips of tongues.

Soft nibbles on vulnerable lips
flavored with strawberries and champagne...


[A reminder of love's passionate nature.]

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  • Cynthia Gaines gold member
    December 19, 2008

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    Beautifully Intoxicating!!!

    You have a winner here... Wishing you both all the best in the contest!! Peace always, Cyn


  • SummerlandRayne gold member
    December 16, 2008

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    How decadent...how sensual...the longing and imagery is lovely! Thank you so very much!!!


  • etoile
    December 14, 2008
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    wow, this was beautiful. the imagery was amazing. you're an amazing writer!!!


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    December 14, 2008

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    you both flow and blend like lie paint to form a masterstroke of words, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest


  • Alyzeh
    December 14, 2008

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    Oh wow! This was so beautifully penned. The sensuality was brilliant, no wait. It was beyond that! Seriously, this should and better win something. =/ It's pure brilliance.

    Loved this! You guys did a wonderful collab! All the best to you both.

    Love
    Alyzeh


  • Lonely
    December 14, 2008

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    Awesome piece of poetry Ylova, and I agree with Nom De Plume, it leaves you wanting to read more.. perfectly romantic Do keep writing

    Love,
    Lonely


  • Nom de Plume
    December 14, 2008

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    This leaves me wanting to read more... romantically beautiful and sensual. good luck in your contest

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