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What is a Man



What is a man to live for
if he knows not the range
of his own self conscious,
& the universe?
Those who know their universe
usually become companion with
their self conscious,
thus revealing their truest
souls and purity of their lives.

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  • Soft-Rain
    January 2, 2009
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    I love this one!!!!!!! Brought straight from your soul!