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A Lifetime Of Achievements


My eyes watch blue skies;
Cats & dogs & trees
When no toy is ever too broken
To describe someone so beautiful, so pure

Inwardly reliving memories
Eyes open wide and unnaturally dry
Forever resounding B-flat

Only achieving
"I wish he was here, I wish he was mine"

So achieving nothing, really.

 

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Check the contest to see the bizarre way this poem was constructed

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  • Joseph Hollis
    December 15, 2008

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    Wow, that certainly is a very bizarre way to construct a poem. It does look like fun, though. This is an excellent write. Well done and best of luck to you in the contest!


  • Brooklynn Tainted gold member
    December 14, 2008

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    Awww thanks for entering :] i like how it came out and see see i toldyou it was fun anyways thanks and good luck :]