A million miles away, each and every day
Distances so far, yet, you heal me
Broken souls ignite
Together gives all meaning,
alone fades away
the tears flow
Not always easy
Imperfection inside.
beautiful to me
No matter that pain inside
How awful you are
You fix me
Author notes
http://au.youtube.com/watch?v=jBEYyHGbwto - Coldplay - Fix You
A contest entry
- What's On My Ipod by Cannonsfire.
1750 points, ended December 23, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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This is a good piece but I think it lacks perhaps that touch of emotion that the song holds, think perhaps with some metaphor you could turn this into wonderful that really would grab me and haul me and break a heart. Feel free to edit. Thanks for following the rules
C
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Good luck your song is FIX YOU - COLDPLAY
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