theres a few things i gotta let you know
my broken heart is all i have to show
what little love he left me with still beats
to try and give you lifes little treats
this angels wings are broken but still will fly for you
my soul still willing to do anything you want me to
chained and tortured you held the key
realeasing my pain and my agony, you set me free
broken and withered you nourished me back
medicine to my soul you gave back all that i lack
Bliss was cut short when the past began to haunt us
making it hard to understand and to trust
i try to keep my heart leaving me vunerable and weak
it makes it that much harder for us to turn the other cheek
though my heart beats for you
the pain they cause makes it murmur not sure what to do
i am only here when you want me to be
i am here in your time of need
your voice in my head
clears out the dread
but i cant help but to say..
my love for you, Do you love me this way?
trembling i take your hand and our fingers fit the empty spots
gazing in your eyes and holding strong we can make it through thier evil plots
i wont go down without a fight
because this love feels so right
like the luminecent moon shining down on the sea
your love shines down on me
the rush i get drives me smilin like never before
laughing till we are unbelievabley sore
i feel safe in your presence
my dreams filled with your intoxicating essence
wildly tossing and turning wanting more
youve penetrated deep within my core
i never let someone go this far in
breaking all the rules i love the sin
ill do things for you i havent done
baby make me your number one
you got me for life or until your through
and i love the way you made me feel so brand new
A contest entry
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A very impressive write filled with lots of emotion some good and some painful all together a good write.
Thank you for your entry and good luck in the contest
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so touching and beautiful here, heartfelt and very touching, how you described everything about love, all it's sweetness and grace, even though sometimes it can be so painful, it's still worth dying and fighting for...




