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Out In the Cold

Out in the cold

living hell alone

Life doesn't seem to hold

all the promise once shown

So beneath the stars tonight

I walk away and die

The scarlet bud lost the light

and broken limbs say goodbye

within the winds the voices call

"come here ol friend of m ine"

Then to the ground I shall fall

for final resting is divine

two timing back stabbing lowly shit

within the dark I call what I see

second chances, four then five, fuck it,

there's nothing left for me

rope in place and I can barely breathe

pain is soaring from chest to feet

yes I am sorry for I did believe

that life with you was complete

now I hang in mid air

and body has gone limp

life is much simpler over there...

Life I thank you, for the coldness I bare

Author notes

I was gone for weeks at a time, days at a time, and well now its that... done. Cant even break away and come back to peace, so why bother. thanks ap

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  • Freed by Mercy silver member
    December 19, 2008
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    What's going on, Sis?


  • ShadoWarrior
    December 17, 2008

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    If this is true I am sory my friend, but either way this is true poetry, raw emotion bleeds from this, I have been there (litrally) not long after I was shot. anyway excellent release of soul Passions.......Z

  • SoulWhispher
    December 15, 2008

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    Well this is a most interesting write so full of emotion, it reaches right out and grabs the reader, fantastic job, Blessings John


  • JaydinC
    December 14, 2008
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    WICKED

    that was f-ing dark. i love how it started all kinda lonely and sad then grew angry. Awesome


  • cricketjeff gold member
    December 14, 2008

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    It is always wonderful to see you back writing but this is hard and sad poetry. Well composed and thoughtful as every but deeply dark and worrying.
    All of us on AP love you, remember that!



  • Disturbed Prodigy
    December 14, 2008

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    i am worry about you but i may not know what happened i just hope that in the end, you are okay, keep it flowing


  • Griswold gold member
    December 14, 2008
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    Ok, what happened now?

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