There is a space deep inside of me,
Empty is all you must see.
I'm thinking of you,
Are you somewhere thinking of me?
Faith is hard to find,
Am I a fool to believe?
I don't know if I do anymore,
As it is hard to grieve.
My heart still yearns,
For the love you displayed.
Your smiles never left me,
Now all that remains is pain.
Shivering in vain,
To shake off the pain,
That I have sustained,
Through out all of this lifetime.
But darkness resides,
In these tormented eyes,
All happiness has died,
For you are forever gone.
Author notes
UNTITLED - SIMPLE PLAN
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Y2lhkCQkhu8
A contest entry
- What's On My Ipod by Cannonsfire.
1750 points, ended December 23, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
so please tell me what you think???
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I went to listen to the song then I read it again. I must say you nailed the song. Good luck in the contest.
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Sums up the sadness of the original song quite well and thank you for following the rules
C
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This is so pretty and deep, you can feel the hurt in it. Amazing job!
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Thank you for reading it!
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great!! you relayed the lyrics so well....
becca
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Thank you for reading, I am glad you liked it.
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Good luck you song is UNTITLED - SIMPLE PLAN
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