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The Ultimate Storm: (The Clash of the Titans)

(Versus, THINKER, and AreSun)

****(Versus the Great!)****
Verses' me, who are you kidding, it can't be
I allowed life to you through the mouth of my seeds
I'm twice times me
The dice always lands on three
I've connected with the apostolic click, (freeze!)
Conquered the circumference of earth's masterminds incredibly quick, (this is free!)
These are edible lyrics
To the feeble minded, the Great Versus curses you chicks and Van Dike Dicks
Quite boisterous when I spit
Cold as Klondike’s when I barf up milk shaking hits
Your heart starts to palpitate once I forge forth with swift kicks
Let these humans feel the Sun'z rays lick-a-dee-split...

***(AreSun)***
Mass words
Masked verbz
Sound bwoy burials floating ghost on oceans of curbs
Lotion for you herbs
Voice box of a thousand, that's absurd
Voice over, about a thousand, all smelling like turds
I'm the wise choice over thousands, salute me, call me sir!

*****(The General, THINKER)*****
Blow holes in chest cavities
Parting seas and teeth, leaving holes in you creeps the size of minced meat, but meeting you gradually
Pull the soul from out your whole existence, that would be me
Crack the Earth's globe under Terrain's degree
Particles unfold once you meet my consciousness and the other parts of my fleet
So I captured the roads and fractured all of life's symmetry
If you're feeling bold, you should mention me
But remember your soles when your feet touch debris
Poking holes in the atmosphere just to catch a glimpse of HE
But I'm unfair, so I blow air and spit acid times three
The nemesis gestured to the trees,
Let this settle in your garments
My palms' wet, my mouth sweats from spewing bomb threats
I'm the nuisance who flew threw to fire those farming vets
Jack Nickleson son, I'm 'As Good As It Gets'
Steel that pierces through Metal
Who fooled this so-called LEGEND fellow?
His Dark and Lovely yellow brother
If Poison was in that ink Pen he would try harder to use it
HD and his Lady habits, figures why he gets confused quick
Bust off 80 rabbits to diffuse you savages
These dudes, I abuse like cabbage, toss 'em in the air and refuel my magic
'Twist these blind Minds' with spews of a brazen maverick
It's amazing how I stole on the world's reigning lieutenant, generals and captains
Brought them all to the war zone, so I slapped them
One big hand attacked ten
One alien verses' many puny humans
You meat balls aren't spicy enough, you need more cumin
The end of your world is near
Place heart protectors over your chest, your living in fear
This war of wordz has sparked the burning envy spare
These earthlings are disconcerting to me
So to my delight I snatch the oxygen and the sea, boxed up the natives moccasins and brandy
Punctured the clouds and folded mother Earth's gravity,
Released their death Certificates after polishing the crown that tilts on the head of me,
Standing on stilts, now your THOUGHT's are vivid as clarity
Take notes when THINKING of your enemy,
Never will there be an end to me!

Author notes

This is one for the ages....grab hold of something sturdy...prepare yourself for the ride of your life! There has been plenty of heat flashed all across the boards thus far, however this is 'The Ultimate storm!' Get ready for the battle of the year, the fight is still alive, within in the minds of many, but the THINKER comes to damage those who may have forgotten HIS force! Brace yourself....World domination has occured!
(The Clash of the TItans!)

This battle of brag is all done with fun. we, my brother's Swangrvn, AsIThink, myself, and moluv 10, have created some awesome characters who are fighting in this intense battle of word warz! However ther can only be one standing member from this war...and his name remains to lead the world with 'EBB and Flow' (AsIThink), lol!

We, my brother's and I hope you continue to enjoy our twisted humor! Please join us in each venture that we attempt to bring you in on! Thanks again in advance. Enjoy boys and girls!

WiseWithWordz 12/14/08

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  • lovelifelive gold member
    October 10
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    hot so freaking hot it a winner you guys are great together and apart you mind blowers this was a amazing write


  • jayyniecakes.
    February 17

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    The nemesis gestured to the trees,
    Let this settle in your garments
    My palms' wet, my mouth sweats from spewing bomb threats
    I'm the nuisance who flew threw to fire those farming vets
    Jack Nickleson son, I'm 'As Good As It Gets'
    Steel that pierces through Metal
    Who fooled this so-called LEGEND fellow?
    His Dark and Lovely yellow brother
    If Poison was in that ink Pen he would try harder to use it
    HD and his Lady habits, figures why he gets confused quick
    Bust off 80 rabbits to diffuse you savages
    These dudes, I abuse like cabbage, toss 'em in the air and refuel my magic
    'Twist these blind Minds' with spews of a brazen maverick
    It's amazing how I stole on the world's reigning lieutenant, generals and captains
    Brought them all to the war zone, so I slapped them
    One big hand attacked ten

    thats my favorite part...

    :]


    • WiseWithWordz
      February 18
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      well i'm please and utterly surprised that anyone would appreciate a Word Warz piece like this...especially if they haven't read the whole series or at least other parts of the series! Much thanks! plz come again!

  • BodomBuddy
    February 17
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    nice work, seriously. that's like a friggin epic. I really enjoyed reading this. =]


    • WiseWithWordz
      February 18
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      lol...an epic....well maybe not an epic, but i did try to end my foes careers...lol...seriously, thanks for your comments, it means a bunch!


  • Gypsy Via Orleans
    February 17

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    from now on i'll just put my name to let
    y'all know i've been here. cause believe me i see
    i have a lot of reading ahead of me.


    • WiseWithWordz
      February 18
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      Gypsy.....your sweet, and much too kind! thaks for considering my thoughts! truly, i'm blessed to be rewarded with all the comments! plz come again....you may be in for a FEW treats!


  • lyricist
    February 2
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    censorship

    #$%^^ &&**^$!@@ ^^&*(((33beep).
    unreal what i just read. beyond fire


  • Swangrnv gold member
    December 15, 2008

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    L.O.L. INSANELY HOTT!

    L.O.L. SERIOUS PUTDOWNS, AWESOME BEYOND MERE WORDS!!!..i always have that!! legend/twisted mind

    Psst!! hey Rome this was crazy hott boy!! damn you can destroy an entire planet with this fire!! loved it kid!!


  • AsIThink gold member
    December 14, 2008

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    LOL...LOL...

    Mr. WiseWordz, this is an incredible 'onslaught'. These 'Word Warz' are hilarious AND dangerously close to needing protective equipment and googles before viewing. Son, you killed this piece. Lots of funny lines and the taunting and "Urban Brag Bag" was wide open. Loved this piece! Definately one of your absolute best!!!

     

    AsIThink... (now for my character's response...lol): 

     

    [[Beep. Beep. Beeeeeeeeeep!!! Welcome to The Page Inker's Automated Message Service. "thinker", you really worked hard to lure people in...what sad, sadistic, imaginative clown you are. The Commander's "Earth Syndicate" ground forces will (once again), bury you in Mother's volanic faults. One bonus for you: your lackey 'AreSun' will re-join the magma pool that he gets his lava from. Beeeeeeeeeeep. Sap.]]

     

     


  • hawkeslake gold member
    December 14, 2008
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    This is powerful stuff! Your words have such force, I'm beginning to get concerned for the others... blowing holes in their chest, sucking out souls (sole? this could be painful) Thinker may be the last word standing yet. I await the next attack with bated breath!


    • WiseWithWordz
      February 11
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      I love your comments...you sure know how to swipe a THINKER off his feet...lol! Appreciate your choice comments!

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